Cold Day


winter wonderland

Alice Popkorn via Comp

walking through the snowy path, free spirited.
snowflake lands on the cold dogs wet nose,
not knowing what to do….
either to go to his owner or run back to his warm and cozy home.
its a very cold day…..

What do you see?

2 thoughts on “Cold Day

  1. Hi Abbey,
    I’m an 8th grade Middle school student from America. I stumbled upon this and thought it was very unique. Unlike your other pieces of writing this one is very short, but that’s what makes it interesting. It is short but simple which I love about it! You left it so that the reader of your piece can imagine what they see and can explore their own world with a little start of your own. This leaves it free for imagination to run wild! Great piece and keep up the great work! Check out my blog at, .

    • Hello Mia,
      Thank you for commenting on my blog. I am very glad you like my poem! Where in America are you from? I will make sure to come cheek out your blog soon. Well I don’t really no much more to say, so goodbye and have a awesome day!
      Sincerely, Abbey

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